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Band 7+: Do you agree or disagree that many young people today want to be famous?

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I agree that many young people today want to be famous. It seems like a lot of youngsters are striving for celebrity status, wanting to be known and recognized. This desire isn't unique to this generation, though. It's been around for a long time. However, with today's technology, the media often portrays celebrity life as glamorous, luxurious, and exciting. This exaggerated portrayal can motivate young people to aspire to fame.

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Well, I do believe that a lot of youngsters these days are craving to be a celebrity, which means that they want to be famous. So. Yeah, and I think that this desire has existed in a lot of generations, not just in young people. Another reason would be that with the technological advancements these days, the media has exaggerated the life of celebrities, which is glamorous, beautiful, luxurious. And these things have been a, uh, motivation for young people to be a famous person.

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Task Response

The student provides a clear and well-structured response, acknowledging the desire for fame in young people and offering a relevant explanation. The answer is slightly repetitive, mentioning 'youngsters' and 'young people' interchangeably. The student could have used more varied vocabulary to express the same idea.

Fluency & Coherence

The student speaks fluently with minimal hesitation and self-correction. The answer is well-organized, with clear transitions between ideas. The student could have used more sophisticated linking words to enhance the flow of the response.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, including words like 'craving,' 'celebrity,' 'glamorous,' and 'luxurious.' However, there are some instances of repetition, such as 'youngsters' and 'young people.' The student could have used more precise and varied vocabulary to express their ideas.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates good grammatical accuracy, using a variety of sentence structures and tenses. There are a few minor grammatical errors, such as the use of 'a' before 'famous person' in the last sentence. The student could have used more complex grammatical structures to enhance the sophistication of their response.

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