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Band 6+: Do you believe that the pursuit of individual happiness can sometimes conflict with the needs of society?

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Whether I think and believe that sometimes the pursuit of individual happiness can conflict with the needs of society. For example, a rich person may wish to have an artificial forest with different types of animals kept and raised there. But in reality, it doesn't align with human rights. Society doesn't accept these kinds of wishes. Moreover, personal happiness may lead to the development of society or benefit society, but not all the time. Personal happiness, like going to the park or playing, can sometimes conflict with societal needs.

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Whether I think and believe that sometimes the pursuit of the individual happiness can conflict with the needs of the society. like a rich guy is wishing to have an artificial forest of her, different types of animals can be kept and bringing up them in the case. But in reality, it doesn’t go with the human rights. The society doesn’t accept these kind of Willing this kind of wishes and moreover personal happiness Me lead to Development of society or the me Benefit the society but not all the time personal happiness like going to the park or having a play in the

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

with: 4

society: 4

happiness: 3

sometimes: 2

conflict: 2

needs: 2

doesn't: 2

personal: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the question and provides relevant examples. However, the examples could be more clearly linked to the core conflict between individual happiness and societal needs. Consider elaborating on the societal implications of the examples provided to strengthen the argument.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations. The organization of ideas could be improved for better clarity. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and maintain a smoother flow. For example, use 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The word choice is sometimes awkward (e.g., 'Willing this kind of wishes'). Try to use more specific and nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas more accurately. Expand your range of synonyms and idiomatic expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains several errors that affect clarity (e.g., 'of her,' 'bringing up them,' 'Me lead to'). There is a limited range of sentence structures. Focus on improving accuracy in basic grammar and try to incorporate more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range.

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