Band 6+: Do you like to watch sports on TV?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question with clear reasons. Consider expanding on the benefits of playing sports with friends or the specifics of your Instagram website to further enrich your answer.

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. The structure is a bit disjointed. Consider using smoother transitions between your points. For example, instead of 'First...Second...', try using phrases like 'Firstly...Moreover...' or 'To begin with...Furthermore...'

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. Phrases like "increase my strength ability" could be improved to "improve my strength" or "build my strength." The phrase "work on my Instagram website" is slightly unusual; consider rephrasing to "work on my Instagram account" or "update my Instagram page."

There are some grammatical errors. "I don't like to go to sport on TV" is incorrect. The sentence structure needs improvement. The second point is also grammatically awkward. Focus on using more accurate and varied sentence structures.