Band 6+: do you plan to get a job in the same field as your subject?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is relevant to the question and demonstrates understanding. However, it could benefit from more elaboration on the specific plans and reasons for choosing this field. Expanding on how the field can be improved and what role the speaker envisions for themselves would strengthen the answer.

The answer is understandable, but the phrasing could be more natural. Instead of "my sphere can be improved," consider rephrasing to something like "I can further develop my skills in this field" or "I hope to contribute to advancements in this field." The overall flow is good, but minor improvements in word choice would enhance fluency.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Using more specific terms related to the field of study would improve the lexical resource score. The phrase "my sphere" is a bit vague; replacing it with a more precise term would be beneficial.

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are minor issues. The sentence structure could be improved for clarity. For example, "when I graduate my university" should be "when I graduate from my university." While the meaning is clear, more precise grammatical structures would elevate the score.