Band 7+: do you plan to get a job in the same field as your subject?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

This is a well-developed and coherent response that directly addresses the question. The answer shows a clear plan and ambition, demonstrating a good understanding of the question. Consider adding more detail about your business plan or future skills development for even greater depth.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. Minor improvements could be made by using smoother transitions between ideas. For example, instead of 'at first time,' consider 'initially' or 'at first.'

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the context. Using 'sphere' is acceptable, but 'field' is more precise and natural in this context. More sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the response.

There are a few grammatical inaccuracies. 'At first time' should be 'at first' or 'initially.' The use of 'a couple years' is slightly less formal than 'a couple of years.' While understandable, these minor errors prevent a higher score.