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Band 6+: Do you think advertisements' portrayal of beauty is correct?

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Well, I don't want to give any opinion about that because it depends on people's perspectives. But to me, if I had to give an opinion, I think they actually show us different perspectives on beauty. Sometimes they are correct because our choices and interests have been changing over the years. So I think they are following people's minds, people's eyes, and people's views. In some cases, I think they are right.

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Well, I don’t want to give any opinion about that because it depends on people’s perspectives. But to me, if I would have to give an opinion, I think they actually show us different perspectives about beauty. But sometimes they are correct because nowadays our choice, our interest has been changing over years. So I think they are following people’s mind, people’s eyes and people’s views. And I think in some cases they are right.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

people's: 4

they: 4

think: 3

opinion: 2

because: 2

perspectives: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is somewhat relevant to the question, but it lacks a clear and consistent viewpoint. Consider structuring your response with a clear thesis statement expressing your opinion, followed by supporting arguments and examples. Avoid phrases like "I don't want to give any opinion" as they weaken your response. Focus on providing a more developed and nuanced discussion of the topic.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition and self-correction, but it doesn't significantly impede understanding. Minor improvements in sentence structure would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. More precise and sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the nuanced aspects of the question. For example, instead of 'following people's mind, people's eyes, and people's views,' a more concise and impactful phrase could be used, such as 'reflecting contemporary aesthetic trends'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence 'But to me, if I would have to give an opinion...' is grammatically incorrect. The use of 'has been changing' is slightly awkward; 'have been changing' is better. More complex grammatical structures would improve the score.

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