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Band 5+: Do you think advertising influences what people buy?

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I think advertising influences people the most because if you create an advertisement that highlights a good aspect, it will make you want to buy something or a service more than something that doesn't advertise anything. For example, cosmetics can enhance your appearance, making you want to have a bright face. This desire encourages you to buy those products more.

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I think adverse thing was influence people the most because if you do an adverse thing that make a good adverse thing it will make you want to buy some things or buy the service more likely than something just doesn’t adverse anything and it will make you want to get that more like cosmetic as worsening it will make you like a bright face so that you want to have a bright face you want to buy something more

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