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Band 5+: Do you think advertising influences what people buy?

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Yes, I think advertising influences people in the modern world. Every social media platform or smartphone programs do this because when we type on the keyboard, they receive this information or voice, and they prepare advertising for people individually. Then these programs show individual advertising to people.

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Yes, I think advertising influences people in modern world. Every social media or our smartphone program to these because when we write at the keyboard they receive this information or voice and they prepare advertising for people like individually and then this programs show to people individual advertising.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

advertising: 3

people: 3

programs: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, it could benefit from more detailed explanation and examples to fully address the complexities of advertising's influence. Consider exploring different advertising techniques and their impact on consumer behavior.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the phrasing is somewhat awkward and repetitive. The structure could be improved by using clearer transitions between ideas. For example, instead of saying "Every social media or our smartphone program to these," a more natural phrasing would be "Social media platforms and smartphone apps use this data." Focus on smoother transitions and more concise sentence structures.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the student uses words like "influences" and "individually," more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Consider using synonyms for frequently used words and exploring more nuanced vocabulary related to advertising and consumer behavior.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and word choice. For example, "Every social media or our smartphone program to these" is grammatically incorrect. The student needs to work on subject-verb agreement and correct use of prepositions. Improving grammatical accuracy will significantly improve the overall score.

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