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Band 7+: Do you think children should be made to do volunteer work as part of their school curriculum?

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I think volunteering is great for children as it teaches kindness and responsibility. However, it shouldn't be mandatory because forcing them to do charity might make them dislike it. The better way is to encourage them to participate in charities. This way, children can develop a genuine interest in helping others.

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I think volunteering is a great for children as it teaches kindness and responsibility. However, it shouldn’t be mandatory because forcing them to do charity might make them dislike it. So the better way is to encourage them to participate in charities. This way children can develop a genuine interest in charities.

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