Band 6+: Do you think children should be made to do volunteer work as part of their school curriculum?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer addresses the question directly and provides reasons to support the opinion. To improve, elaborate on the benefits of developing social skills and implementing theoretical knowledge practically. Providing specific examples would further strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is direct and relevant. To improve coherence, consider adding a brief explanation or example to support your points. For instance, you could elaborate on how volunteer work develops social skills or provide a specific example of theoretical knowledge being applied practically.

The vocabulary is adequate for expressing the main ideas. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to education, social skills, and practical application. For example, instead of 'develop their social skills,' you could say 'enhance their interpersonal skills' or 'foster empathy and teamwork.'

The grammar is mostly accurate. The only correction needed is changing 'in the practical basis' to 'on a practical basis.' Continue to focus on using prepositions accurately and expanding your range of grammatical structures to express more complex ideas.