Band 5+: Do you think fashion is important in every day life

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The answer is relevant to the question and touches upon the impact of fashion on self-image. However, it could benefit from a more in-depth exploration of the question's scope. Consider discussing the social and cultural aspects of fashion, or different perspectives on its importance. Elaborating on the connection between clothing durability, mass production, and the overall significance of fashion in people's lives would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable, but the ideas are not fully developed. There's a slight lack of coherence in the second sentence, which jumps from self-image to the production of clothing. Improving the linking words and sentence structure would enhance fluency and coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "durability" and "mass production" are used correctly, but more precise and varied vocabulary would improve the score. The phrase "sweet fabric" is unusual; consider replacing it with a more appropriate adjective like "soft" or "comfortable".

There are some grammatical errors. The sentence "It's from wherever and it's not from textile" is grammatically incorrect and unclear. The student also uses simple sentence structures predominantly. Improving grammatical accuracy and using more complex sentence structures would significantly improve the score.