Band 6+: Do you think fashion is important in every day life

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a clear opinion. However, further development of ideas and examples would strengthen the response. Consider exploring different aspects of fashion's importance, such as social impact or self-expression, to provide a more comprehensive answer.

The answer is coherent, but there are a few minor issues with fluency. The phrase 'dress up depending on situation' could be improved by adding 'the' before 'situation'. The connection between the second and third sentences could be smoother. Consider using a transition word like 'However' or 'Although' to better link the ideas about fabric quality and brand preference.

The vocabulary is adequate, but some words could be more precise. 'Wear quality' is a bit vague; consider using 'high-quality' or 'well-made'. The phrase 'a piece of comfort' is not quite idiomatic; 'a sense of comfort' or 'comfort' would be better.

There are some grammatical errors. 'Despite of the fact' should be 'Despite the fact'. The sentence 'Nevertheless, I prefer the wear quality and brand clothes because it can give you a piece of comfort' has a subject-verb agreement issue ('clothes' is plural, but 'it' is singular). The sentence structure could be improved for greater clarity and impact.