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Band 6+: Do you think more money should be spent on protecting wild animals?

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Yes, I think it's absolutely essential to spend more money on protecting wild animals. They are a vital part of our ecosystem. Without them, it's difficult to maintain a healthy environment. A balanced ecosystem is crucial for the survival of all species, including humans. Protecting wild animals is not just about preserving biodiversity, but also about ensuring the long-term health of our planet.

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Yes, I think it’s quite, really beneficial. While protecting wild animals, uh, depending upon money. Because they are, uh, main asects of our life. Because without. Without them, our etem can be maintained properly. It is difficult to maintain a proper ecosysm in. In any type of habitat, uh, and for the protection of other animals. I think while elements are quite necessary.

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protecting: 2

animals: 2

ecosystem: 2

about: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The student provides a clear and relevant answer to the question, acknowledging the importance of protecting wild animals. However, the answer could be more specific and elaborate on the benefits of protecting wild animals. For example, the student could mention the role of wild animals in pollination, pest control, or maintaining the balance of ecosystems.

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The student's speech is somewhat hesitant and contains some repetition and self-correction. The answer lacks a clear structure and could benefit from more cohesive devices to connect ideas. For example, the student could use transition words like 'furthermore' or 'in addition' to link their points.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. For example, 'asects' should be 'aspects' and 'etem' should be 'ecosystem'. The student could also use more specific vocabulary related to the topic, such as 'biodiversity' or 'conservation'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good understanding of grammar, but there are some errors in sentence structure and word order. For example, the sentence 'While protecting wild animals, uh, depending upon money' is grammatically incorrect. The student could also use more complex sentence structures to enhance their answer.

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