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Band 6+: Do you think more money should be spent on protecting wild animals?

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It's not about the amount of budget; it's about the quality. It's not about the quantity; it's about the quality. By money, you might refer to something like an animal protection team or potential accommodations for those animals. But it's important to protect them from hunters, especially because wild animals are more likely to be hunted by people for their invaluable horns or skins. So it's really crucial to focus on the way we protect the animals rather than the amount of money being spent on the tools and equipment for those poor little animals.

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It’s not about the amount of budget, it’s about the quality. It’s not about the quantity, it’s about the quality. So by money you might say that you might say something like animal protection, animal protection team or machine or potential accommodations for those animals. But it’s important to protect them from hunters especially. because wild animals are more likely to be hunted by people for their invaluable horns or skins. So it’s really crucial to focus on the way they’re protecting the animal than the amount of money that is being spent on the tools and equipment for those poor little animals.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

it's: 6

about: 4

animals: 4

amount: 2

quality: 2

money: 2

those: 2

protect: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question, but it does not fully address the prompt. While the discussion of protection methods is valid, it would benefit from a more direct response to the question of increased funding. Consider directly addressing whether more money should be spent and then supporting that position with examples of how the money could be used effectively.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition ("It's not about the amount of budget, it's about the quality. It's not about the quantity, it's about the quality.") which could be eliminated for improved fluency. The ideas are logically connected, but smoother transitions between points would enhance the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly precise. Words like "invaluable" and "crucial" demonstrate a good range. However, more sophisticated vocabulary could be used to express the ideas more effectively. For example, instead of 'poor little animals,' consider using a more formal term like 'endangered species'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence "So by money you might say that you might say something like animal protection" is grammatically awkward and could be restructured. While the range of grammatical structures is sufficient, more complex sentence structures would improve the score. Consider using more subordinate clauses and participial phrases to add variety and sophistication.

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