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Band 4+: How can businesses better balance the pursuit of profit with their social responsibilities?

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I think one way that businesses could do this is by balancing profit, not just focusing solely on profit, but also considering public opinion and similar factors.

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I think one way that business could do this is by you know balance the profit not just focus pooling on profit also about the public opinion and some kind of that

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response touches on the topic but lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, consider elaborating on the 'public opinion and similar factors' mentioned and providing concrete strategies businesses can implement. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat hesitant and lacks clear organization. The use of 'you know' is a filler and detracts from fluency. To improve, try to structure your answer more clearly, perhaps by outlining a few specific strategies businesses could use. Avoid filler words and practice speaking more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. The phrase 'some kind of that' is vague. To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to business ethics and social responsibility. For example, instead of 'some kind of that,' you could say 'ethical considerations' or 'community welfare.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar contains errors and lacks complexity. The sentence structure is simple and repetitive. To improve, focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as conditional sentences or relative clauses. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct word order.

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