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Band 6+: How can businesses better balance the pursuit of profit with their social responsibilities?

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From my perspective, I believe that one thing that could be helpful is that companies share the real data about how what they manufacture affects the environment. This way, companies can create a solid plan for the environment. Also, I think that the government has a big responsibility in these situations because some companies have special permits from the government that allow them to explore and exploit natural areas that sometimes need protection. However, it is often the opposite. So we have a significant problem with that. I think the most important thing is that companies share the real data.

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From my perspective, I believe that one thing that could be helpful, it is that the companies share the real data about how, what they manufacture affect the environment. So the companies can do, can will do a really good plan for the environment. Also I think that the government has a big responsibility in these type of situations because some companies have special permise for the government so they can explore and expose natural areas that sometimes have to be protected for the government, but it is all the opposite. So we have a really big problem with that. I think that the most important is that the companies share the real

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companies: 4

thing: 2

share: 2

environment: 2

think: 2

government: 2

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. Words like 'good,' 'big,' and 'real' are used frequently. To improve, try to use more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to environmental protection and social responsibility. For example, instead of 'good plan,' consider 'comprehensive strategy' or 'sustainable initiative.'

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