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Band 7+: How can schools better prepare students for the challenges of the modern workplace?

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So I think that educational systems do prepare some criteria for students to address the challenges of the modern workforce. For example, I see a lot of schools implementing extracurricular activities, which help students have a wider understanding of what the workspace is like. Also, presentations often occur in the classroom in some specific lessons, which help students gain more confidence and enhance their teamwork skills. This will definitely help them in the workforce in the future.

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So I think that educational system do prepare some criteria for students to address the challenge of modern workforce. For example, I see a lot of school have to implement the have to go to the circuit extra curriculum activities which help the students to have a more wide wide opens of what this what like all the work space is like and also the come the presentations is often occurs on all the classroom in some Pacific lessons which help the student more confidence and more and then enhance their teamwork and definitely gonna help them in a workforce in the future.

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