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Band 7+: How can societies better support the mental health and well-being of individuals in increasingly stressful environments?

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I reckon societies should start with social awareness of common mental health issues. By that, I mean they have to spread more research and information among their citizens and provide local establishments that can support those people with psychological problems.

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I reckon societies should start off with social awareness of the common mental health issues and by that I mean they have to spread more researches, more information among their citizens and provide local establishments which can support those people with some psychological problems.

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