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Band 6+: How can societies better support the mental health and well-being of young people?

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Well, I think that society can better support the mental health of young adults by providing support. This includes offering advice on their lifestyle and simply listening and caring for them. Not every teenager can express everything they want to their parents. Therefore, I believe that every teenager needs help from their friends or peers who can support, listen, and motivate them to reinforce and develop their skills, as well as to better understand how to live in our world.

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Well, I think that society better support the mental health of young adults in the way of supporting them. Like, saying some advices of their lifestyle and just listening and taking care of them. Because not every teenager can say everything they want to their parents. So in this way, I think that every teenager needs some help by their friends or some mates that can support and just listen and motivate them to reinforce and to develop all their skills and also to better know how to live in our world.

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The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The word choice is simple and could be more sophisticated. To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to mental health and support systems. For example, instead of 'taking care of them,' you could use 'providing emotional support' or 'offering guidance.'

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