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Band 6+: How can societies better support the mental health and well-being of young people?

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Well, if I'm not mistaken, there are a wide range of ways to support the mental well-being of young people in our 21st century. Firstly, they can teach students to improve their cognitive thinking skills and also

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Well, if I’m not mistaken, there are a wide range of ways of supporting the mental wellbeing of young people in our 21st century. Firstly, they can teach their students like improving their cognitive thinking skills and also

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Task Response

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The grammar is generally accurate, with only a minor correction needed ('of supporting' changed to 'to support'). Aim to incorporate a wider range of grammatical structures, such as complex sentences with subordinate clauses, to demonstrate greater grammatical range. For example, 'By teaching students cognitive thinking skills, societies can empower them to better manage stress and challenges.'

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