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Band 6+: How can societies effectively address the growing problem of digital addiction?

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In the last 10 years, people have become more and more addicted to their mobiles. However, some people use them correctly and for beneficial purposes, but most people do not. So we need to control our screen time. It helps us a lot.

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In last 10 years, people have become more and more addicted to their mobile. However, some people use them correctly and or beneficial works, but most of people, most of persons don’t do this. So we need to control our screen size. It helps us a lot.

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A2 - Upper Beginner
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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response touches on the topic of digital addiction and suggests controlling screen time as a solution. However, it lacks depth and specific examples. To improve, elaborate on the potential solutions and provide more detailed explanations.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and a lack of smooth flow. The ideas are presented, but the connection between them could be stronger. To improve, try to elaborate more on each point and use linking words to create a smoother transition between ideas. For example, you could say, 'Furthermore, controlling screen time can help us a lot because...'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. The phrase 'screen size' is not quite accurate; 'screen time' is more appropriate. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to the topic of digital addiction. For example, instead of 'beneficial works,' you could say 'productive activities' or 'educational pursuits'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'most of people, most of persons.' The correct phrasing would be 'most people.' The range of grammatical structures is limited. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of sentence structures and ensuring grammatical accuracy. Practice using complex sentences and different verb tenses.

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