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Band 6+: how can the type of school you go to affect your career success?

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I think there are various types of schools that can affect my career success. As I want to pursue a career in IT, I will face difficulties if I go to a place where no technological advancements have been introduced. For example, in Nepal today, we can see there are various schools that haven't engaged with any technological tools, such as machines that are used even in some places nowadays. There are also schools without computers, and the teaching methods are not effective. Therefore, I have to choose wisely about which colleges or schools I am going to attend, as this will affect my career.

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I think there are various types of school that affects, that can affect my career success because as I wanted to be a student of IT career, technical field and I will get difficulty if I go to the place where no technology advancement have been introduced such as in Nepal today also we can see there are various schools who haven’t engaged with any technological things like machines tools that is used even in some places nowadays there are no computers and teaching learning way are also not good so far that I have to choose wisely about which colleges are schools I am going to choose which will go going to affect my career

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

schools: 4

there: 3

that: 3

career: 3

various: 2

affect: 2

technological: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some insights into how school type can influence career success. However, it mainly focuses on the negative aspects of attending a school lacking technological advancements, and it could benefit from exploring a wider range of school types and their potential impacts. Consider discussing the influence of different educational philosophies, resources, and networking opportunities on career paths.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There is some repetition and self-correction ("that affects, that can affect"; "which will go going to affect"). Focus on smoother transitions between ideas and avoid unnecessary repetition to enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly sophisticated. While the student uses relevant terms like "technological advancements" and "teaching methods," more precise and varied vocabulary would strengthen the response. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to showcase a wider range of vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including subject-verb agreement issues and incorrect word order ("no technology advancement have been introduced"; "teaching learning way are also not good"). While the overall message is clear, improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

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