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Band 6+: how can the type of school you go to affect your career success?

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I think there are various types of schools that can affect my career success. So I will choose a high school where a teacher can teach computer skills properly. Because nowadays, if you don't know how to run a computer, then you are just like a blind person. If I build my career, I would choose a school where teachers can teach computer skills effectively. When I learn computer skills properly, that can affect my future career. When I finish my studies, it can also help me get a better job. So definitely, I will choose a school where teachers can teach computers properly.

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I think there are various types of schools that can affect my career success. So I will choose high school where is teacher can teach computer properly. Because nowadays if you don’t know about how to run a computer then you are just like a blind people. So if I build up my career then I would choose a school where teacher can teach computer based properly. So when I learn computer properly, that can affect my future career. When I finish my study and it also can help me to get a better job. So definitely I will choose a school where computer can teach teachers properly.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

computer: 4

career: 3

choose: 3

school: 3

where: 3

teach: 3

skills: 3

properly: 3

affect: 2

teachers: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response is somewhat relevant but lacks depth and breadth. It focuses narrowly on computer skills and doesn't explore the broader impact of school type on career success. Consider discussing other aspects like networking opportunities, reputation, or specific programs offered by different schools.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there is noticeable repetition of ideas and phrases, such as repeatedly mentioning 'computer' and 'teachers teaching properly.' This affects the flow and makes the answer less engaging. To improve, try to vary your sentence structure and use synonyms to avoid repetition. Also, consider organizing your points more clearly, perhaps by providing a specific example or elaborating on how computer skills directly translate to career success.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is relatively simple and lacks precision. Phrases like 'teach computer properly' are not very natural. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more specific and nuanced vocabulary related to education and technology. For example, instead of 'teach computer properly,' you could say 'provide comprehensive computer training' or 'offer instruction in digital literacy.' Also, try to incorporate more idiomatic expressions related to career development.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the response, including incorrect verb tenses ('where is teacher can teach'), subject-verb agreement issues ('teacher can teach'), and awkward phrasing ('computer based properly'). While the meaning is generally clear, these errors detract from the overall quality of the answer. Focus on practicing accurate grammar and sentence structure. Pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles. Review basic grammar rules and practice applying them in your spoken English.

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