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Band 6+: How can we balance the need for economic growth with the preservation of cultural heritage sites?

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People can balance the need for economic growth with the protection of culture by preserving cultural heritage and historical landmarks. When they protect these cultural and historical landmarks, they can support their economy. For example, when we protect cultural and historical landmarks, people come as tourists. If that helps the economy of the city or town grow, this is the reason. The other reason is that they can't balance if they want to.

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People can balance the need for economic growth with the protection of culture by growing the culture heritage and historical landmarks. Because when they grow the cultural and the historical landmarks, they can protect their economy. For example, when we protect the cultural and the historical landmarks, people can come as a tourism. If that makes the economy of the city or the town grow up, this is the reason. The other reason is that they can’t balance if they want to.

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cultural: 3

historical: 3

landmarks: 3

people: 2

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protect: 2

economy: 2

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