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Band 6+: How can we encourage young people to go to parks more often?

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We can encourage young people to visit parks by building fitness-related equipment in the parks, as well as having the government create playgrounds. All these things will encourage adolescents to go to parks more often.

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We can encourage young people to visit parks like we can build fitness related equipments in the parks as well as the government can make playground in the parks and all these things will encourage adolescents to go to parks.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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parks: 3

encourage: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

5.5

The answer is quite brief and could be more comprehensive by exploring a wider range of strategies to attract young people to parks. Consider discussing the role of technology, community events, or improved safety measures. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. Words like "fitness-related equipment" could be replaced with more specific examples (e.g., 'exercise machines,' 'basketball courts'). More varied vocabulary would improve the score.

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The grammar contains some errors, particularly in sentence structure and the use of articles. While the meaning is clear, more attention to grammatical accuracy and the use of a wider range of grammatical structures would improve the score. For example, instead of 'We can build fitness related equipments,' it should be 'We can build fitness-related equipment' or 'We can install fitness equipment.'

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