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Band 7+: How can we encourage young people to go to parks more often?

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By collaborating with local schools and educational institutions, we can encourage young people to visit parks more frequently. If schools incorporate park visits into their recreational activities, young people will become familiar with parks and be more willing to spend leisure time there. Additionally, improving facilities and amenities like Wi-Fi zones will attract younger generations.

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By collaborating with local schools and educational institutions, we can encourage young people to visit parks more frequently. If schools incorporate visiting parks in their recreational sections, young people become familiar with parks and will be willing to spend leisure time in parks. In addition, by improving facilities and amenities like Wi-Fi zones, places for younger generations.

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