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Band 6+: How can we encourage young people to stat healthy?

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Parents should set a good example. But I strongly believe that the schools have a crucial role to play. Not only can they offer a wide range of support for children to play, they can teach them about eating a balanced diet and the negative effects of junk food and not exercising. If children don't hear this from home, they have to hear it from somewhere, and I would assure that it is the school's responsibility.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Parents should set a, uh, good example. But I strong believe that the schools have a cruso grow to fl. Not only can they offer a wide range of support for children to playee, they can teach them, um, about eating a bln beaching, bland balance diet and the negative effect of e chalk drunk food and not exercise. If children don’t here on this from home, they have to hear it from somewhere, and I would asure that it is calledus responsibility.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

they: 3

children: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is quite good and addresses the question directly. Consider expanding on the types of support schools can offer and providing specific examples of how schools can teach about healthy eating and exercise. Adding a concluding sentence summarizing the main points would also strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the fluency is hampered by several filled pauses ('uh', 'um') and a slight mispronunciation ('cruso grow to fl' instead of 'crucial role to play'). Smoother delivery and reduced hesitation would improve the score.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate, with good choices like 'balanced diet' and 'junk food'. More sophisticated vocabulary could elevate the response. For example, instead of 'not exercising,' the student could use 'a sedentary lifestyle'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors ('I strong believe,' 'playee,' 'bln beaching, bland balance'). While the overall message is clear, improving grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance the score. The final sentence is also slightly awkward. A more natural phrasing would be 'It is the school's responsibility to ensure children learn about healthy habits'.

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