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Band 5+: How do different generations perceive the concept of success and achievement?

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In the past, to become a successful person, it was necessary just to be a hard worker and to be patient about the field you are into, but well nowadays it has completely changed. In the case with the increasing social media influence, people have become more oriented towards spontaneous success. I mean, completely to be focused on something that is related with social media. Actually, there is an opinion that to achieve success is an easy thing. You just need to be an outgoing person.

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In the past to become a successful person it was necessary just to be a hard walker and to be patient about the field you are into, into it, but well nowadays it has completely changed and in the case with well I mean with the increasing social media influence people has become more oriented and spontaneous success. I mean completely to to be focused on something that related with social media and actually Well, like there is an opinion that to achieve success is an easy thing. You just need to be an outgoing person.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

become: 2

person: 2

completely: 2

social: 2

media: 2

success: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer addresses the question about generational changes in the concept of success, contrasting past values of hard work and patience with modern social media influence. However, it could be more fully developed by providing specific examples or discussing other factors like education or career paths. The response is somewhat general but leans slightly towards personal opinion rather than a broad analysis. To improve, consider elaborating on different generations (e.g., Baby Boomers, Millennials) and including more balanced perspectives.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer has some coherence but is disrupted by hesitations ('well', 'I mean'), repetitions ('to to'), and incomplete thoughts. The structure could be clearer with better use of cohesive devices. Practice organizing ideas logically and reducing fillers.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but limited and imprecise (e.g., 'hard walker' instead of 'hard worker', 'spontaneous success' is unclear). There is some attempt at paraphrasing but lacks flexibility. Expand vocabulary with precise terms related to success and generational change.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is inconsistent with errors like 'people has become' (subject-verb agreement), 'to be focused on something that related' (missing verb), and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are mostly simple. Work on subject-verb agreement and using a variety of complex structures accurately.

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