Band 5+: How do you think the concept of 'family' has changed over the past few decades?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer partially addresses the question by acknowledging that the concept of family has changed, but it does not clearly identify the main drivers of this change. The response shifts to personal experience, which is not appropriate for Part 3, and the example about the brother is not directly relevant to the broader societal change. The answer lacks depth and development, and the reasoning is somewhat unclear. To improve, focus on discussing general societal trends, such as economic factors, changing gender roles, or cultural shifts, and avoid personal anecdotes. Provide a more structured and comprehensive response.

The answer has a clear structure with an introduction, a personal example, and a concluding remark. However, there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions (e.g., 'car use' instead of 'career', 'it's like an example of a sword you know') that disrupt fluency. The idea about 'a sword' is unclear and not well-developed, which affects coherence. To improve, practice speaking more smoothly and ensure each point is clearly explained.

The vocabulary is adequate but limited. There is a significant error: 'car use' instead of 'career', which changes the meaning. The phrase 'example of a sword' is confusing and not idiomatic. To improve, expand vocabulary related to family and societal changes, and use precise terms. Avoid vague expressions and ensure word choice is accurate.

The grammar is mostly accurate but simple. There are some errors: 'he's choosing' should be 'he chose', 'it's like an example' is awkward. The sentence 'people on the other hand choose their family because they love them' is correct but lacks complexity. To improve, use a wider range of structures, such as conditionals, relative clauses, and more complex sentences, while maintaining accuracy.