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Band 5+: How do you think the concept of 'family' has changed over the past few decades?

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Many concepts of family have changed over the decades, and the implications of those changes are significant. Families living together have many advantages, as the cost of living is much lower. When our family dynamics change, such as with a spouse who works more or less, it depends on both individuals. This brings many difficulties. The implications of these changes also include people moving to other cities for marriage.

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Many concept of family changes and decades implication of those changes due to factored whenever family live joint who was going to have many advantages all the cost is very less for living when our family change in spouse who has more, less and more over working is in depends on both people. That is many difficulties. Implication of these changes. and people going to other city marriage with include too.

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