Band 6+: How important is it to you to spend time outdoors?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the question directly and provides a personal perspective. The answer could be improved by providing a more detailed explanation of why spending time outside is important, or under what circumstances it might not be.

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are some hesitations and a lack of smooth flow. The ideas are connected, but the delivery could be improved. Try to minimize pauses and speak more continuously. Use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly varied or precise. The phrase "a size match by green around within the city" is unclear and inaccurate. Focus on using more precise and natural vocabulary. For example, instead of 'a size match by green around within the city,' you could say 'a sense of calm with the greenery around the city.'

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are some errors. For example, "spending time outside with my friend helped me relax" should be "spending time outside with my friends helps me relax." Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to improve your score.