Band 5+: How important is it to you to spend time outdoors?

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

The response addresses the question but could be more detailed. Consider expanding on the reasons why spending time outdoors is important to you personally, rather than providing general statements.

The response is somewhat coherent but contains some repetition ('everyone and also every person should spend time outdoors'). The flow could be improved by avoiding unnecessary conjunctions and structuring the answer more directly. Try to vary your sentence structure and avoid repeating the same ideas in slightly different words. Focus on providing a clear and concise explanation.

The vocabulary is basic and lacks precision. The phrase 'hear words song' is not natural. To improve, try to use more specific and descriptive words related to the outdoors and feelings. For example, instead of 'good feelings,' you could say 'a sense of tranquility' or 'invigorated.'

The grammar is generally understandable, but there are some errors ('there are also birds. people see a hear words song'). The use of 'a' before 'hear' is incorrect, and the sentence structure is awkward. Focus on using correct articles (a/an/the) and constructing grammatically sound sentences. Practice using a wider range of sentence structures to express your ideas more effectively.