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Band 6+: How might changes in family structures affect the way children are raised and socialized in the future?

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I see in their family or in their home that they will repeat their parents' actions. When they are little, they tend to listen to their parents and do what they say. In this way, family structures will affect the social and emotional development of children. If their parents provide good things to their children, they will grow up to be a good boy or good girl. If they do not, their children may act out or behave like others.

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I See in their family or in their home and they will repeat their parents actions and they just when as they are little people they tend to just listen to their parents and do what they say and in this way family structures will affect the social and emotional development of children and if their parent will give just good things to their children they will as a good boy or good girl and if they do not like this their children will sub-burn or like others

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