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Band 5+: How might changes in family structures affect the way children are raised and socialized in the future?

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The family is important from the perspective of the child. The structure of the family is changing to improve the personality and skills of children as they grow into adults in the future. For example, parents should accept the children's competition and encourage them to pursue what they love. The family should not manipulate too much because manipulation limits the activities and skills of the children. Students often lack soft skills, which are essential for their future. Skills are not a panacea, and having only technical skills is not enough for them to succeed in life.

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The family is the important from the light of the child. The structure of the family is to change to improve personality and skill of children to go to the human adult in the future. for example the parent should be should accept the children’s compitiation of the children and should the student to shoot anything when them love the family not much manipulates because the manipulates is the sub limited that our activity and skill of the student also the people the The student is not have a soft skill and the future is a speciality of the student. The skill is not a pan and the future is not enough to anything for them to sell.

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family: 3

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