Band 6+: how much has technology improved how we communicate with each other?

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The answer stays on topic and directly addresses the question about the extent of technological improvement in communication. It provides a clear contrast between past and present methods, and includes a relevant point about the expansion of social networks. However, the response could be more fully developed by elaborating on specific technologies (e.g., video calls, social media platforms) and their broader societal impacts, rather than focusing on personal examples. Additionally, the phrasing 'their messages are carried out instantly' could be more precise (e.g., 'delivered instantly'). To reach a higher band, aim for a more general and analytical discussion, perhaps mentioning how technology has changed the speed, reach, and nature of communication, and consider adding a concluding thought.

The answer is generally coherent and addresses the question directly. However, there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('immensely for sure immensely', 'you know', 'to you know to reach each other'), and a false start ('they have to or they can't I just text each other'). The use of cohesive devices is limited to 'Additionally' and 'whereas', which are appropriate but basic. To improve, reduce hesitations and self-corrections, and use a wider range of linking words (e.g., 'Furthermore', 'In contrast', 'Consequently') to enhance coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate and conveys the intended meaning, with some good expressions like 'carried out instantly' and 'a smaller circle of people'. However, the range is limited, and there is some imprecision (e.g., 'hundreds and hundreds of followers' is repetitive; 'they have to or they can't' is unclear). To achieve a higher score, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'instantaneous transmission', 'expanded social networks', 'virtual connections') and avoid informal or vague phrases.

The grammar is mostly accurate, with correct use of past and present tenses. However, there are some errors and awkward constructions: 'they have to or they can't I just text each other' is grammatically incorrect and confusing; 'their messages will be carried out instantly' uses a future tense where present simple is more appropriate; 'people nowadays, they have' is a common redundancy (double subject). To improve, focus on sentence structure, avoid double subjects, and use a wider range of grammatical structures (e.g., conditionals, passive voice, complex clauses) naturally.