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Band 6+: If you could donate a large amount of money to any charity what would it be

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If I could donate a large amount of money to any charity, it would be to support people with disabilities. I would donate a large amount of money because they often struggle to find jobs and face many challenges. I think they are very abandoned by society. They do not deserve to experience negative treatment, and people should not abandon or treat them poorly. This is the reason I would choose to donate to support people with disabilities with a large amount of money.

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If I could donate a large amount of money to any charity, so it would be maybe disability people. I would be donating disability people to the large amount of money because they don’t have any, the think that doing jobs or any other things, so they are very, I think they are very abandoned from socials. So they don’t need to deserve any bad things from society and people don’t need to abandon and treat them like very bad. So it’s the explanation that I would donate to disability people for all the large amount of money.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

donate: 3

large: 3

amount: 3

money: 3

would: 3

people: 3

with: 3

they: 3

support: 2

disabilities: 2

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Pronunciation

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear reason for the choice. Consider expanding on the types of support you would like the donation to fund, and perhaps offer a more nuanced perspective on the challenges faced by people with disabilities, moving beyond general statements about societal neglect.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There is some repetition and self-correction. Try to plan your answer briefly before speaking to improve coherence and reduce hesitations. For example, instead of saying "disability people" repeatedly, use more concise phrasing like "people with disabilities" or "disabled individuals".

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. Words like "abandoned from socials" are not quite accurate. Consider using more precise vocabulary such as "socially marginalized," "underprivileged," or "disadvantaged." Expanding on the specific challenges faced by people with disabilities would also enrich your lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect word order ("I would be donating disability people") and incorrect use of articles and prepositions. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and complex sentences, to demonstrate a higher level of grammatical proficiency.

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