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Band 6+: In what ways can urban planning contribute to a greater sense of community and social cohesion?

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Urban planning has a crucial effect on communication, community building, and social interactions. It helps create good relationships in our society and especially allows children to easily play with other kids, fostering competition and interaction among them.

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Urban planning has a really crucial effect. Communication, creating and social interactions. It’s really help for our create good relations in our society and also help especially the Children can easily play with other children. That children have competitions other kids.

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