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Band 7+: In what ways can urban planning contribute to a greater sense of community and social cohesion?

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I would say that to promote a greater sense of community and belonging, urban planning could be improved by making the houses and parking areas closer to each other. Besides that, public parks and public squares could also be invested in to provide people with a place to enjoy.

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I would say that in order to promote a greater sense of community and belonging, I think urban planning could be improved by just making the houses and the parking areas more close to each other. besides that, public park and public squares could also be invested in order to provide people with a place for them to just enjoy.

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Task Response

The response addresses the question by suggesting improvements to urban planning. To improve, consider elaborating on the potential impact of these changes and providing more detailed examples.

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The response is generally coherent and easy to follow. The ideas are presented in a logical order. However, there is some slight hesitation and repetition ('I think,' 'just') that affects the overall fluency. To improve, try to minimize filler words and speak more directly.

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The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but it could be more precise and varied. The phrase 'invested in' is appropriate, but consider using more sophisticated vocabulary related to urban planning and community development. For example, instead of 'making the houses and the parking areas more close to each other,' you could say 'integrating residential areas with parking facilities' or 'designing neighborhoods with closer proximity between housing and parking.' This would demonstrate a wider range of vocabulary.

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The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors. The sentence structure is relatively simple but correct. To improve, try incorporating more complex sentence structures and a wider range of grammatical forms. For example, you could use conditional sentences or relative clauses to express more nuanced ideas.

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