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Band 5+: In what ways might globalization change the traditional family structures in your country?

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Let me explain the situation based on my country's structures. In our country, we have traditions that might not change in 100 years, but after globalization and social media, our traditions evaporate step by step and lose their meaning. With these changes, I think we betray our traditional values. When the values of traditions evaporate, there is no sense of the history of our country. I can say that the history of our country is gradually reaching zero. From my point of view, this is very challenging.

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Yeah, let me explain the situation depending my country structures. Yeah, probably in our country we have our traditions that we might not change in 100 years, but after globalization and social medias, our tradition evaporates step by step and losing meanings. So with those steps, with globalization, I think we betray our traditional values. On top of that, the values of traditions, when the values of traditions evaporate, then there is no sense in history of our country like I can say the history of our country step by step is reaching to zero so that’s I in my front of from a point of view it’s very challenging and

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