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Band 7+: In your opinion, what are the key factors that contribute to successful integration of immigrants into a new society?

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Well, if we look from the migrants' side, I think they should be resilient to the challenges they may face. They should also be outgoing to different areas, like different regions and cultures, so they can quickly get used to the norms and regulations. Additionally, being patient is important because migrating is not an easy process, so they should be patient in reaching the goals they set before coming to that country.

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Well, if we will look from the from the migrants’ sides, I think they should be resilience among like to the challenge that can face to them. So they also should be outgoing to different areas, like different regions, different culture so they quickly get used to it to its norms and regulations. Also being patient because migrating is not an easy issue so they should be patient to reach their goals that they have set before they came to that country.

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The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with words like 'resilience,' 'outgoing,' 'norms,' and 'regulations' being used appropriately. However, the range could be broader and more precise. Consider using synonyms and more specific vocabulary to express your ideas more accurately. For example, instead of 'easy issue,' you could say 'straightforward process' or 'simple undertaking.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors ('if we will look' should be 'if we look,' 'challenge that can face to them' should be 'challenges they may face,' 'get used to it to its norms' should be 'get used to its norms'). The range of structures is somewhat limited. To improve, focus on using a wider variety of grammatical structures and pay attention to correcting common errors. Review conditional sentences and pronoun usage.

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