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Band 6+: In your opinion, what are the most important factors contributing to a strong sense of community?

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I believe that expressing your feelings contributes to a strong sense of community. For instance, if you're talking to a person and not actively engaging with them, then there is no use in building a strong relationship. If you are interested in them, you have to continually communicate by sharing your personal opinions and what you like. This will surely encourage them.

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I believe that expressing your feelings would be a strong sense of communication. For instance, let’s say if you’re talking to a person and if you’re not more actively talking to or chatting to him then there is no use of building strong relationship. If you are interested in them then you have to continually communicate with them with sharing your personal opinions and also what are the things that you like. This will surely encourage them.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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strong: 2

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Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question but the development of the ideas is somewhat limited. To improve, consider providing a wider range of factors and elaborating on each with more specific examples or explanations. Focus on providing a more comprehensive and varied answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and slight reformulations. The use of 'let's say' is a bit informal for Part 3. Try to maintain a more academic tone. To improve coherence, consider using more varied cohesive devices and structuring your points more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The phrase 'no use of building strong relationship' is slightly awkward. Consider using synonyms and more sophisticated vocabulary related to community and relationships. For example, instead of 'talking to,' you could use 'engaging in dialogue with.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few minor errors (e.g., 'no use of building'). The range of structures is somewhat limited. Try to incorporate more complex sentence structures and a wider variety of grammatical forms to demonstrate greater proficiency.

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