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Band 6+: In your opinion, what are the most important factors contributing to a strong sense of community?

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In my opinion, I believe that sensation and belongingness to somewhere and to something creates a strong sense of community. For example, if we go abroad and represent ourselves from our home country, it creates a strong sense of belonging, and we help each other just because we are from the same country. We respect that and support that person more than someone from another nation. Also, if you are from the same college or even the same city, it creates belongingness, and you prefer to lean more toward them than to other people.

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In my opinion, I believe that sensation and belongingness to somewhere and to something is create strong sense of community. For example, if we go abroad and we represent ourselves from our home country, it belongs and creates strong sense and we help each other just because we are from same country and we are respecting that and we will support that person more than the person from not that nation and also if you are from same college or from even same city it creates Blongingness and you prefer to lean more toward him than to other person and Yeah

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that: 3

creates: 3

same: 3

belongingness: 2

strong: 2

sense: 2

country: 2

other: 2

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