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Band 7+: In your opinion, why do some people have a strong influence on others?

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Some people have a stronger influence on others due to their personality, achievements, and the way they communicate, think, and interact in society. For example, confident people can express their ideas clearly, which makes a big impact on others. In addition, success through hard work can help someone become a role model for others. Besides that, humble people who talk calmly and positively can leave a strong impact on society. In this way, people start following their habits and mindset. I also follow one of them because someone has had a huge impact on my life.

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Some people have a stronger influence on other role by their personality achievement and the way they communicate, think, and interact in societies. For example, our confident people can express their ideas clearly, which make a big impact on people in addition to success through hard work can become a role model for others. Besides that, humble people who talk calmly and positively can leave a strong impact in society. On this way people start following their habits mindset. I also follow one of them because someone has a huge impact in my life.

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The response addresses the question directly and provides several reasons for why some people have a strong influence on others. The answer includes relevant examples to support the points made. To improve, focus on expanding the explanation of each point and ensuring the examples are fully integrated into the response.

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The answer is generally coherent and easy to follow. The use of 'For example' and 'Besides that' helps to structure the response. However, there are some minor hesitations and a slightly repetitive structure. To improve, try to vary sentence structure and use a wider range of cohesive devices.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like 'personality,' 'achievements,' 'communicate,' 'interact,' 'confident,' 'humble,' and 'mindset' are used correctly. To enhance the lexical resource, incorporate more nuanced vocabulary related to influence and personal qualities.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some errors. For example, 'role by their personality achievement' should be 'due to their personality and achievements.' Also, 'On this way' should be 'In this way.' Correcting these minor errors and using a wider range of grammatical structures would improve the score.

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