Band 6+: Is there a hobby you would like to try in the future?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is highly relevant and provides a detailed response that goes beyond a simple 'yes' or 'no'. You successfully connected a past interest to a future ambition, which adds depth to the conversation. To improve further, ensure that the distinction between a 'hobby' and a 'career' is clear. While pursuing a passion can be a hobby, the response leans heavily towards professional career goals. In an IELTS context, you might want to briefly mention how you would enjoy this activity in your leisure time to more directly address the concept of a hobby.

The speaker communicates their ideas clearly, but the structure is somewhat repetitive. The use of 'where' to connect multiple clauses ('where I can be able to...', 'where I will be evaluated') creates a run-on sentence effect rather than a sophisticated flow. To improve, try using a variety of cohesive devices such as 'not only... but also', 'in order to', or 'consequently' to link your ambitions more smoothly.

You used some good thematic vocabulary like 'international platform', 'evaluated', and 'sophisticated'. However, there was a slight misuse of terms at the end ('best chef on Michelin chef'), which suggests a lack of precision regarding how the term 'Michelin star' is used. Instead of saying 'become a Michelin chef', it is more natural to say 'earn a Michelin star' or 'become a Michelin-starred chef'.

There are several grammatical issues that hinder the score. First, 'can be able to' is redundant (use either 'can' or 'will be able to'). Second, there are issues with noun-number agreement ('different kind of individuals' should be 'different kinds of individuals'). Third, the sentence structure is quite basic and relies heavily on 'and' and 'where'. To reach a higher band, practice using complex structures like conditional sentences (e.g., 'If I had the opportunity, I would...') or relative clauses more accurately.