Band 4+: last weke I entered a new school and I was the first to introduce myself to my classmates. This is how my acquaintance began. I first met my best friend, Jasur. I was like that. I got very angry and tired easily and I didn't like people. He would tell me about himself.

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

The response is relevant to the prompt and demonstrates a basic understanding of the task. However, to improve, more details and specific examples could be added to enrich the narrative and showcase a wider range of vocabulary and grammatical structures. Consider expanding on Jasur's personality and how your friendship developed. Adding more descriptive language will enhance the overall quality of the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is understandable, but there are noticeable hesitations and repetitions ("I've known" repeated multiple times). Improving fluency would involve smoother transitions between ideas and reducing filler words. Practice speaking at a consistent pace and focus on connecting your thoughts more naturally.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The word "cosmetes" is incorrect; using "classmates" would be more accurate. While the meaning is clear, using more sophisticated vocabulary would enhance the response. Consider synonyms for "angry" and "tired" to show a wider range of vocabulary.

There are several grammatical errors. The sentence structure is often fragmented. For example, "Last week introduction I've known" is grammatically incorrect. Focus on constructing complete and grammatically correct sentences. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and tense consistency.