While I’m coming to my coming to the, uh, nursing, um, nursing, uh, work the first time, Uh, I was very innocent and also, uh, I felt I am not bold enough and um, uh, sharing every matters and, uh, chattering chatting with my colleagues a more, um, for a more for, uh, spending more time. Uh, these these, um, behaviors affected my life, uh, really, um, hardly because, And that, um, as I was not that much strong and also feared if in any situations, and she shared and depend on them, uh, for everything, uh, was created a very big struggle in my uh, nursing carrier because one day, my sister was always the sister, he was being charged. She was allocated the, um, some allocated, some nursing staff every day. So it should be in rotational. But as I was not bold enough and I’m not talking enough, She, uh, was, uh, uh, allocated every day, uh, that task to me. So one day, I was, uh, blasted with the, uh, emotions and, uh, asked her the asked her the, asked her for justice, but at the time, she was cornered and was rejected. My, uh, argument. At the time, I was felt that much of frustrated because I did all the works that she was given me, um, very, um, enthusiastically and also respected her, uh, in, uh, optimum level. Other than my colleagues, but she didn’t understood me. So I, at that moment, I was understood. I must always be very intellectual and must be the person, uh, uh, in front of me, uh, and I will I should be understand them and act according to their characters So I should be more intelligent, uh, and bold than the person.
Band 5+: Part 2- Describe an important change you would like to have in your personality You should say: - What it was about - When it happened - How it happened - And explain how it affected you later in life
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When I first started my nursing career, I was very naive and lacked confidence. I wasn't comfortable sharing my thoughts or engaging in conversations with my colleagues, which made it difficult for me to build strong relationships. This lack of assertiveness had a significant impact on my professional life. For example, there was a situation where my sister, who was also a nurse, was consistently assigned the same tasks every day, even though the workload should have been rotated among the staff. I was hesitant to speak up about this unfair treatment because I was afraid of confrontation. One day, I reached my breaking point and expressed my frustration to my sister, but she dismissed my concerns. I felt deeply hurt and misunderstood, as I had always been dedicated to my work and respected her. This experience was a turning point for me. I realized that I needed to be more assertive and confident in order to advocate for myself and ensure fair treatment. I decided to work on developing my communication skills and becoming more proactive in expressing my opinions. This change in my personality has been incredibly beneficial. I am now more comfortable speaking up for myself and others, and I am no longer afraid to challenge unfair situations. This newfound confidence has empowered me to navigate the challenges of my nursing career with greater strength and resilience.
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