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Band 6+: Risk-taking why do people like doing dangours things? why do some people enjoy extreme sports?

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Doing dangerous things can make people's lives feel a bit more lively. Maybe it's because engaging in different types of extreme activities, like bungee jumping, rafting, or paragliding, provides a thrill. These activities are inherently dangerous, but some people enjoy the adrenaline rush and the sense of accomplishment that comes with overcoming a challenge.

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Doing dangerous things make people life a bit. Life lively, maybe because, like, doing, uh, uh, different types of dangerous things, like bungee jumping, rafting, parag griding. These things are very dangerous itself. We know, uh, but.

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Task Response

The answer is relevant to the question and provides some reasons why people enjoy extreme sports. However, it could be more developed by providing more specific examples and elaborating on the reasons. For example, the answer mentions "adrenaline rush" but doesn't explain why this is appealing to some people. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some of the words are not used with complete accuracy. For example, "lively" is not the most appropriate word to describe the feeling of excitement. The student could also use more specific vocabulary related to extreme sports, such as "adrenaline junkie" or "risk-taker".

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The answer contains some grammatical errors, such as the use of "make people life a bit" instead of "make people's lives feel a bit". The student could improve their grammar by paying attention to subject-verb agreement and using correct articles.

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