Band 5+: To what extent do cultural traditions play a role in shaping individual identity in a globalized world?

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The response addresses the question but could benefit from further elaboration and specific examples to strengthen the argument. Consider expanding on how cultural traditions differentiate individuals in a globalized world. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there's some repetition ('making it a big role') that affects the flow. Try to avoid repeating phrases and instead use synonyms or rephrase your ideas for better fluency.

The vocabulary is basic but relevant. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to culture and identity. For example, instead of just saying 'different,' you could use words like 'unique,' 'distinct,' or 'individualistic.'

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