Band 6+: To what extent do you agree that social media has made people more or less empathetic?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response touches on the negative impacts of social media but does not directly address the question of whether it increases or decreases empathy. To improve, focus on providing a clear stance on the question and supporting it with relevant explanations.

The response is somewhat coherent but contains some hesitations and awkward phrasing. The ideas are presented, but the connections between them could be clearer. To improve, focus on structuring your answer more logically, perhaps by using signposting phrases (e.g., 'Firstly,' 'Secondly,' 'In addition').

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision. The phrase 'distant place' is repeated and could be expressed more accurately. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to the topic of social media and empathy.

The answer contains grammatical errors such as incorrect verb conjugations ('who have distant place' should be 'who are in distant places') and awkward phrasing ('makes our actual interaction with others around us is more or less'). To improve, focus on using correct verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Practice constructing more complex sentences accurately.