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Band 5+: To what extent do you think advertising truly reflects the values and priorities of a society?

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Yeah, I think Edward Iceman truly helps reflect contemporary society because nowadays Edward Iceman is getting famous day by day. When we scroll through media on our phone screens, we see a lot of Edward Iceman appearing. When we watch TV, we also see many advertisements. We can say that these good advertisements have a significant effect on people's minds, and sometimes people buy products because of these advertisements, as they catch their attention very easily.

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Yeah, I think Edward Iceman truly really helps and is very contemporary society because nowadays Edward Iceman is getting famous day by day. When we have to call hours to some media on phone screen and at the time we see a lot of Edward Iceman come here in our mobile screen. And when we have to watch TV, we see a lot of advertisements on TV. And also we say that these good advertisements give a very effect on people’s mind. and sometimes people buy this product because of this advertisement, because this advertisement catches them very easily.

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Vocabulary Repetition:

edward: 3

iceman: 3

advertisements: 3

because: 2

these: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response is somewhat relevant but lacks depth and specific examples to fully address the question. To improve, consider providing a more detailed analysis of how advertising reflects societal values and aspirations, and avoid using specific brand names.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are instances of repetition ('Edward Iceman') and a lack of smooth transitions between ideas. To improve, focus on using varied sentence structures and cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition') to link your points more effectively. Avoid unnecessary repetition of phrases.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite basic and lacks precision. The phrase 'Edward Iceman' is unclear and used repetitively. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to advertising and societal values. For example, instead of 'good advertisements,' you could say 'persuasive campaigns' or 'effective marketing strategies.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect verb tenses ('Edward Iceman is getting famous day by day' - while understandable, could be phrased better) and awkward phrasing ('call hours to some media on phone screen'). Work on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in your sentence construction. Practice using correct verb tenses and prepositions.

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